lonely shepherd

March 3, 2006, 1:17 am

The feeble written wittaps through the fogwith an old mans cane,while the pompous elegant versestrides briskly past,seeking reality at the sidewalks end. Silently surveying his gutter world,the street...

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Re: lonely shepherd

March 3, 2006, 4:54 am

Craig,Very interesting thoughts. I like your usage of "pompous elegant verse" in these lines:The feeble written wittaps through the fogwith an old mans cane,while the pompous elegant versestrides...

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Re: lonely shepherd

March 3, 2006, 10:35 am

Uniquely Craig as everLove that first stanza Craig. I had a peep at the links too. Liked the intervie and that wonderful picture.

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Re: lonely shepherd

March 3, 2006, 3:18 pm

Craig,The tense waves of inflexible boundaries,and coloring inside those lines?The lonely shepherdis not a street urchin,I think, but a prohpet.I see an artist, barefoot in the grass, playing...

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Re: lonely shepherd

March 3, 2006, 7:41 pm

Enjoyed the contrasting images. We won't mention that the pompous elegant verse strode confidently off the end of the sidewalk, stepped in a deep pothole, and fell flat on its elegant face.

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Re: lonely shepherd

March 4, 2006, 4:01 am

Craig ~It seems most everyone is mentioning the first stanza. It is terrific, tightly written with beautifully honed words. And then you give us this..." Silently surveying his gutter world,the street...

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Re: lonely shepherd

March 5, 2006, 9:12 am

this just wallops you in the gut in the best of ways... your way with words has me quite beholden. such a talent, sir- and i an avid fan.stokies

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Re: lonely shepherd

March 5, 2006, 11:19 am

Hell yeah this one is so good.I find it very interesting how your images workon so many levelsEspecially when there are so few wordsthat burn these images.this whole section just rocksQuote: Silently...

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